First Patch for Parts 1 and 2

fixed typos and grammatical errors. i want the prose to be smooth, goddamnit. i think I've found most(or all) of them though. 

I went through it over and over again before releasing Parts 1 and 2, but there's always that sneaky little "anythign" or "youre" or something. Twine doesn't support a spellchecker so I guess the lesson here is to find another way of automatically spellchecking next time. Would save me tons of work. 

I hope you're enjoying the story! The rest is soon to come!